剑桥雅思Test 3全面解析-写作（Task 2）

题目解析

y Some people say that the way to improve public health is by increasing the

number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect

on public health and that other measures are required.

有的人认为改善公共健康的最好方法是增加体育运动设施的数量，然而也有的人认为这

样的举措的效果并不会太好因而我们需要其他的措施。

y 题目名曲要求我们给出双方观点，因此我们需要即写出增加体育运动设施给大众健康带

来的好处，又要写出其局限以及其他改良的方法；

y 题目包含的因素有：健康、体育设施

写作思路

支持增加体育设施：

1. 现代人的生活过于安逸；

2. 增加体育设施有助于运动增加；

3. 还可以激发人们对于体育的兴趣；

反对增加体育设施

1. 体育设施吸引来的人可能并不是需要锻炼的人； 

2. 体育锻炼设施应适当廉价，这有助于小孩及家长一起运动；

3. 存在其他的同样可行的方法改善公共健康

范文解析

以下范文是剑 9 中给出的考官官方高分范文，全文及具体解析如下：

A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general

population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One

possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active

lifestyle.

第一段：采用了引出问题的开头方法，将公共健康的下降看成是现代社会的一大问题，进而

引出建设更多体育设施的解决方法。

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working

conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or leisure

time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we could be more likely to

make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a

screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all

ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school

might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch. 

第二段：对于增加体育设施对于提升公共健康的正面作用做了阐述。先给出人们生活过于安

逸的段落背景，然后提出 easy-to-reach 的体育设施会增加人们体育运动的可能性，进而

减少看电视的时间。最或补充还提出了体育设施多样性的好处。

However, there may be better ways to tackling this problem. Interest in sports is not

universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those

who must need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for

example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done.

This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just

for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

第三段：这一段主要用来阐述增加体育设施的局限以及与此相关的一个建议。体育设施吸引

来的人很可能是已经足够健壮的人而非那些真正需要器材来帮助他们的人。相对应的，作者

提出若能多在类似公园的地方安放廉价的体育设施效果可能会更好，因为这样有助于帮助孩

子养成从小锻炼的习惯。

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food

products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these

contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes

longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

第四段：作者在本段中给出了其他的增加公共健康的方法：对高热量食物、烟草和酒水增税

及改善公共交通情况。

In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would

not have the desired result. People should be encouraged not only to be more

physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

第五段，最后一段中对前文进行了总结，指出单纯增加体育设施的方法是存在局限因而无法

达到预期目标的。为了更好地公共健康，我们需要采取一种更为之全面的健康的生活方式。

精彩句子

1. Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful

working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our

work or leisure time.

2. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we could be more likely to

make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front

of a screen every evening.

3. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together

just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

4. In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and 

would not have the desired result.

类似真题

1. Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government of a country to

ensure a healthy lifestyle for its people, while others believe that individuals

should be free to make decisions for their lifestyles.

Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2008.3.29

2. The government should spend money on promoting a healthy lifestyle to

prevent illness rather than on the treatment of people who are already ill.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2009.3.31

3. Some people say that the government should not put money on building

theatres or sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical

care and education.

Do you agree or disagree? 

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